New Techno Track iiiiinside...feedback appreciated

[Ms Blue Beats]

edit...Tha helicoptah is a complete and utter douche bag moron

v---------ThaHelicoptah

Okay...So most people that know me think that Im your stereotypical cynical junglist who hates everything else...but I have an appreciation for techno, hardcore, and good speed garage...as well as various other genres...so I wanted to give producing techno a shot.
This is the 2 techno track I've ever started..and the 1st I've ever finished. I cant promise its the greatest ever...but Im pretty proud of it.

Krz - Berfy Nerps (http://www.thatsiccness.com/misc/Krz%20-%20Berfy%20Nerps.mp3)

[technoaddict]

Not bad....its got some groove to it. I hear the Speed Garage influence. If I were going to alter it I would start with beefin up the bassline. Its nice and mello soundin how it is but I might add some faster drums to give it a lil more energy. I noticed that synth sound that was at the beginning of the tune didn't ever come back....not that its bad. I give it 3/5 Fro-men!!! >>>:) >>>:) >>>:)

[ThaHelicopstah]

Thanks for the comments...I also agree the bass deeps some cow meat...and I've heard from others that the beats needs more...Im gonna do some work on it...and try automating a few effect in reason...Not sure how its gonna sound just yet...but I was gonna try and put a subbase in it...see if I can give it a lil more umphhhh.

Anyone else have any comments??

[MOTU]

Sounds like a fruity track.
not bad for tucan sam...

[ThaHelicopstah]

Sounds like a fruity track.
not bad for tucan sam...

Its springtime...the season is the Reason

he he

[MOTU]

hard to tell the difference..they both sound exactly the same.