bring me death

[loky]

no matter how hard i try it never lets me be.
i all want is to be left under a tree.
i want it more then any thing in the place,
and all it does is stare me in the damn face.
why wont it come to me and release me from these times.
what do you want me to do. commit a crim?
if that is so then i will do it, i will not run.
so maybe this time i wont beat death by a gun!
just in the end i ask to be left in place be the tree.
so that i may set and released free!

[Cell Construct]

Hm. Right. Please refer to the "submerse into deep thoughts" section under topic:death and the afterlife.

My feelings still the same. No offense at all your piece was greatly writtin just dont dig the message at all.

[loky]

WHAT!! this is a poem. so it stays in the poem section. but thanks on the comp. no ever comps i. ^:? :|

[sweetiepie21702]

i agree with loky.. well written :D

[loky]

umm ...... thank u :P